You should take their critsim seriously.
Japanese sensibilities cannot be applied to India, even tho manga is mainstream the more perverted parts of the manga is still frowned upon by the public.
Your focus should be your own art style and expression. If you choose the perverted part you will end up like a 3rd rate Porn artist, the minority might be loud but you will end up in a niche category which won't let you escape the tag.
@Johny_Baba I think you will more or less agree.
All your art have been about designing a perfectly attractive female character.
You may say this is a practice but there are other ways of practicing character design that isn't perfectly rounded ass and boobs.
How about you learn to draw action dynamics, characters doing some action where a viewer is forced to appreciate the characters expression rather tha its physical appearance.
I'll suggest you start drawing inspiration from a particular manga
You would say you can't draw at this level but that won't help your argument.
There are probably million more artists that draw sexually sugtsive dumb characters and manga plays
So what's your unique selling point?
Try to focus less on skimpy clothes, suggestive features and looks.
You are getting into a trap that probably every artist does.
Don't be a third rate artist, your heading towards one if your don't shift your focus.